June 20, 2005

Some writing...

Bit of dialog from a short comic I'm writing, not done yet (so friggen close), I'm think it's going to be black and white, probably 32 pages. I've removed the descriptive bit from the first panel because I don't want to give away what they're (a cop and the main character) looking at.

Panel One

Police Chief (off panel): He’s been missing over three days. He jumped onto one of those windsailers on a resort and disappeared. The fool’s family demanded the Bahamian navy search the waters for him.

Panel Two

Tim and the Bahamian police chief talking, an orderly pushes the gurney away. This is all taking place on the dock at their hotel.

Tim: There’s a Bahamian navy?

PC: Dat guy’s family wishes there was.

Posted by bkirsten at June 20, 2005 04:58 PM | |